// "My Own Prison" // // This is a great demonstration of // negative space using nested loops and // non-continuous straight lines. The // The shading here is also good with the // the light coming from the appropriate // source (from the right) with the // proper darkening effect. // The one thing I would change about // the picture is the shape of the base // of each bar. When focusing on the // bottom, I was reminded of an image of // rotated solar panels (which still evokes 3-d-ality) // as opposed to prison bars. I don't know // how to create a circular base, but // perhaps a diamond shaped base would // be just as effective. // For that I would continue to shift // the bars themselves paraller, but not have // the bottom side of the shape of each // bars have the same constant slope. // Good work.