//Paper 50 //Pen 0 //Line 10 20 80 70 // // critique // // i believe that your line // is a self-representation. // the line breaks conformity with // off-centeredness, but its long // length and steep upwards climb // indicate effort and struggle. // // your line floats in the air by itself. // perhaps this means that origin // and destination are uncertain. // // i believe you would benefit from // taking advantage of the tone of // paper and pen to enhance your message. // perhaps, you could express the // idea that the path to your destination // is visible but not obvious, // you could try reducing the contrast // of the paper and line, as follows: // Paper 40 Pen 27 Line 10 20 80 70